Hare of the Dog
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LOL
Thanks guys!
I'm still going through editing all the typoes and stuff and I noticed you've already been through the story. Hope it wasnt too butchered on the first read through for you. I fixed a lot of stuff in there.
I did forget to post a picture of Charlie before his chain broke. Sorry buddy!
His dale is one of the strongest pulling machines I've ever been on. Musta been a wednesday bike!
Thanks guys!
I'm still going through editing all the typoes and stuff and I noticed you've already been through the story. Hope it wasnt too butchered on the first read through for you. I fixed a lot of stuff in there.
I did forget to post a picture of Charlie before his chain broke. Sorry buddy!
His dale is one of the strongest pulling machines I've ever been on. Musta been a wednesday bike!
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Good job, good story, :clap: but you know that you will have to change your name now.
Isn't it one of the most frustrating things when lappers won't get out of your way? I had one lapper yell back at me after I yelled at him to move over, never did get out of my way. I had to go thru a huge mud puddle to get around.
Isn't it one of the most frustrating things when lappers won't get out of your way? I had one lapper yell back at me after I yelled at him to move over, never did get out of my way. I had to go thru a huge mud puddle to get around.
Okay, that was one of the best stories I've ever read! One suggestion though, PLEASE type it all out at once next time! Imagine this: I'm sitting at work with access to a computer for read only purposes, I see your story, I'm totally drawn into it with suspense and all, hitting the refresh button every 10 seconds and doing my other duties at the same time. I was going nuts waiting for the ending! I felt like I was watching the Lord of the Rings or something. lol Absolutely awesome though! Keep the streak going and maybe it should be: Lappintraffic
P.S. I wonder what your decibals were at 1/4 throttle and mouth wide open? ha ha
:clap: :usa :cheers:
P.S. I wonder what your decibals were at 1/4 throttle and mouth wide open? ha ha
:clap: :usa :cheers:
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Great Job Lap!! Great story as usual. I wish I could write a story like that. My race report reads something like this: came off the line, rode hard for 5 laps, either won or lost. :cry:
I bet in school, you could write a 5 page book report after reading a 5 page story. :usa
Keep us posted, always look foward to reading your posts, and usually feel like I was there after reading it. Matter of fact, just got off the phone with my brother, and telling him all about it. He said something about going riding with you, don't think he realized you are a few states away.
I bet in school, you could write a 5 page book report after reading a 5 page story. :usa
Keep us posted, always look foward to reading your posts, and usually feel like I was there after reading it. Matter of fact, just got off the phone with my brother, and telling him all about it. He said something about going riding with you, don't think he realized you are a few states away.
Great Job, Lapper!!!!
That's you yelling when the beast came out!!
Congratulations! I know that felt good. Thanks for sharing the story!:clap: :clap:
:usa
Congratulations! I know that felt good. Thanks for sharing the story!:clap: :clap:
:usa